So I'm writing a screenplay...

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(10-23-2017, 05:20 PM)XenoMorph Wrote: You can kill every single one of them off.....  Just don't introduce and immediately kill to many.


You could even end it when the 1 person left finally thinks they have it all to themselves and some stranger shows up and kills them and takes it hahahahaha


Also where you build a guy/girl up to be one thing and they completely blow it or shit happens   Like this the Hero he's a badass  then he dies quickly.





Like this one of my favorite parts of a movie ever lol...

Thanks for jumping in.

The bolded part is absolutely brilliant.  You have written the ending.  And then to add one more final twist, the stranger, who will be the last person standing, doesn't even know about the money and no one ends up with it.

The more I think about it, the more I love the idea of the whole town wiped out.   That would be absolutely unprecedented.