10-23-2017, 05:57 PM
(10-23-2017, 05:51 PM)McC Wrote: Thanks for jumping in.
The bolded part is absolutely brilliant. You have written the ending. And then to add one more final twist, the stranger, who will be the last person standing, doesn't even know about the money and no one ends up with it.
The more I think about it, the more I love the idea of the whole town wiped out. That would be absolutely unprecedented.
I like it....
