So I'm writing a screenplay...

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(10-24-2017, 09:43 AM)Wyche Wrote: Yeah, I like that ending as well.  This thing is gaining some traction......I dig.  I hope you can use some of my ideas for side characters....I've been in some small towns, and seen a lot of the types I gave you, lol.

I absolutely can.  And you reminded me of something from my childhood.  The little town I grew up in had this guy--Tom Sawyer was his name, yes, his actual name. 

He ran the Boys Club.  Boys, from, oh, five to say, fifteen.  He taught you knot tying, canoeing, bow and arrow, such things.  Had meetings on Saturday afternoon, had a place above the volunteer firehouse.  You get the picture.

You would see him leading his gang of boys around town on their way to one thing or another, all wearing Boys Club  sweatshirts.

So, for our story, we make these kids a roving death squad killing people with bows and arrows, knives and perfectly knotted ropes.

You know, a really great idea is one that not only is great on its own but inspires other ideas.  That's what your great ideas did for me.