01-29-2018, 10:19 AM
(01-14-2018, 03:06 PM)fredtoast Wrote: I did not read the whole thread, but it sounds like you don't really have a story. You need a conflict and a resolution.
No matter how clever the deaths are it will get boring without a storyline being advanced.
I agree wholeheartedly. I do have story, conflict and resolution. They are essential. I didn't really get into it in the thread because I was just looking for input on all the killing.
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