08-29-2019, 01:46 PM
Not bad but here is my suggestions.
Give specific examples of what you are talking about. You make a bunch of broad general statements, but without exact lines or plot points from the movie it just kind of rambles.
I have had lot of people tell me movies are funny or good, but without some more specific details or examples it doesn't really register.
Give specific examples of what you are talking about. You make a bunch of broad general statements, but without exact lines or plot points from the movie it just kind of rambles.
I have had lot of people tell me movies are funny or good, but without some more specific details or examples it doesn't really register.
