05-15-2016, 06:00 PM
(05-15-2016, 05:53 PM)BFritz21 Wrote: Actually, once again you post bullshit.
Everyone said that it was fine the way it was, except for Fred, which he said it was because the opening sentence had three independent clauses.
They he re-wrote it, and just tried to keep in with his independent clauses theme, which he took sentences that flowed perfectly and separated them, making it sound choppy and unintelligent.
He also edited it to add things that were just unnecessary and sounded stupid.
You need to quit using the word 'everyone'.
This is another case of you only remembering something the way you want to.
We will now just agree to disagree.
