10-04-2016, 03:17 PM
(10-04-2016, 01:32 PM)michaelsean Wrote: "When you're telling these little stories, here's a good idea - have a point. It makes it so much more
interesting for the listener!"
In this case for interesting for the reader.
But thats irrelevant because it wasn't a story but an observation.
Observations are commonly made from a point already presented.