11-11-2016, 11:46 AM
(11-10-2016, 05:30 PM)wolverine515151 Wrote: I can't get through more than a few sentences of hobsons deplorable writing before I have to shut it down and try and let my mind heal itself from the onslaught of horrible writing I was just tortured with.
You just strung together 3 clauses (one with a compound predicate) in one sentence and ended it with a preposition.
Maybe Hobson's style hurts your head because you don't know what proper writing actually looks like.
