10-22-2017, 12:49 PM
I would also like to throw in the idea of a suicide gone wrong.
One of the characters is going to off themselves(because of guilt of killing or know of the killings)but changes his/her mind only to cause the death of another character.
If it was another murderer who had no remorse... you could have the chickened out person make some snide jokes about it.
You could also throw in a scenario that might happen in town where bodies could be disposed of or to hide the murders.
Like a barn burning / land explosion.
Just trying to get the remains to the site might be of good dark comic fun.
Another classic twist is someone who is presumed dead is not.
Lastly the unknown killer who has ties to the suitcase may be sadistic and testing the people of each little town.
This just being one of many to prove a point that greed is everywhere.
You could really make a point of this by having the people in the town be preachy about "city folk" and how the world seems to be going to hell.
Especially the dialog in the diner before the large man with the suitcase shows up.
This is where the beginning of urban sprawl, hippies, disco, and other topics could come into play.
A Vietnam vet could also be a character.
Sorry, I have a vivid imagination. LOL
One of the characters is going to off themselves(because of guilt of killing or know of the killings)but changes his/her mind only to cause the death of another character.
If it was another murderer who had no remorse... you could have the chickened out person make some snide jokes about it.
You could also throw in a scenario that might happen in town where bodies could be disposed of or to hide the murders.
Like a barn burning / land explosion.
Just trying to get the remains to the site might be of good dark comic fun.
Another classic twist is someone who is presumed dead is not.
Lastly the unknown killer who has ties to the suitcase may be sadistic and testing the people of each little town.
This just being one of many to prove a point that greed is everywhere.
You could really make a point of this by having the people in the town be preachy about "city folk" and how the world seems to be going to hell.
Especially the dialog in the diner before the large man with the suitcase shows up.
This is where the beginning of urban sprawl, hippies, disco, and other topics could come into play.
A Vietnam vet could also be a character.
Sorry, I have a vivid imagination. LOL
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