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So I'm writing a screenplay...
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(10-23-2017, 08:48 PM)oncemoreuntothejimbreech Wrote: I imagine Dale and Tucker vs. Evil meets The Hateful Eight and those two movies have an illegitimate love child; your manuscript.

Regarding how many deaths before it isn't funny: Everyone dies. Everyone.

When it comes down to the last two characters; one is killed and the other mortally wounded. The wounded character chains the case to their wrist, hops in a car and starts driving until the see the lights of a diner in the distance, pulls into the parking lot, struggles to a booth, inside the diner you got the same basic collection of characters in another BFE town as in the opening scene, before long they realize the stranger with the case is dead and someone asks, "I wonder what's in the case?"

Fade to black.

Rolling Stones Paint It Black plays as the credits roll.

This is not bad at all.
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So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 02:42 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 11:40 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 01:18 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 11:48 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 02:00 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 11:45 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 02:31 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:02 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-21-2017, 04:41 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:40 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:05 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:09 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:38 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:23 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 01:18 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 02:21 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 05:07 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 05:09 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-22-2017, 10:45 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-23-2017, 05:51 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-23-2017, 06:59 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-24-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-24-2017, 09:58 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - fredtoast - 01-14-2018, 03:10 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-24-2017, 10:11 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 11-19-2017, 03:30 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 10-24-2017, 11:52 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 11-19-2017, 10:29 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 01-29-2018, 10:19 AM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 01-29-2018, 04:03 PM
RE: So I'm writing a screenplay... - McC - 09-25-2018, 11:59 AM

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