Ray Lewis III Is Evolving Into His Old Man!

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(05-15-2016, 02:50 PM)Harmening Wrote: You're posting specific events as YOU see them, not necessarily how they actually happened.
You've done it before on the Adderall comments you made, saying that you 'misspoke' and deleted it less than thirty seconds later, when in fact, you continued to claim it wasn't a drug until enough people told you that it certainly was.
You did the same thing on a thread you made asking for advice on some speech you wrote.  People tried to help you clean up the poor grammar, and you claimed that they were saying things that they never did.
That's just a couple.
That said, follow people's advice.  You stew over some of the weirdest things.  It's bizarre.

Actually, once again you post bullshit.

Everyone said that it was fine the way it was, except for Fred, which he said it was because the opening sentence had three independent clauses.

They he re-wrote it, and just tried to keep in with his independent clauses theme, which he took sentences that flowed perfectly and separated them, making it sound choppy and unintelligent. 

He also edited it to add things that were just unnecessary and sounded stupid.