05-24-2017, 01:46 PM
(05-24-2017, 01:32 PM)Slythe Wrote: Run on sentences everywhere. I don't want to be an armchair critic; I have no professional experience in journalism. However it's quite apparent he needs some feedback on several facets of his writing style.
He really should work on monitoring his sentence length, crafting smooth transitions between thoughts, not relying so much on confusing figures of speech, and (in general) being more to the point.
He seems like a good guy, and he puts out a lot of content. He just needs to work on some of these fundamentals. Unfortunately it might not be as apparent to him as it is to myself and many others.
Why derail a thread because you disagree with a writing skill? You and others are free to start a bashing Hobson thread at any time.
I would appreciate if we focus on the content, not the grammar.
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First 6 years BB - 41 wins and 54 losses with 1-1 playoff record with 2 teams Browns and Pats
